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April 26, 2011 Comfort – #oneshotwednesday – @oneshotpoetry

I kiss you
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My lips on your flesh
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One small touch
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Of my lips
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To reassure your longing soul
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I love you always

// #Shadorma Sunset By Cardean Roads Designs at Flickr //

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Permalink # Chris G. said

I’m not sure on the necessity for two spaces between some lines where only one lies between others…not sure of the purpose of that, but of a kiss, I might simply say, there is no better reassurance, no sweeter gift with which to greet a sunset.

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  I don’ t like to rush something beautiful…. like a sunset kiss. Thank you for your comment.
  
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Permalink # moondustwriter said

SHort and sweet and an excellent use of the Shadorma
Thanks for the one Shot

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  You are welcome, Leslie. thank you for your comments.
  
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Permalink # dani said

{sigh}

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank you for your comment, Dani.
  
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Permalink # dustus said

I’m going to book mark your poem to use for next Valentines Day. lol Seriously though, excellent Shadorma.

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank for your comment, Adam
  
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Permalink # Apryl Gonzales said

Passionate and provocative, just the way a love poem should be, nicely done!

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank you Apryl for seeing the passion.
  
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Permalink # pandamoniumcat said

Very nice..everyone needs a little reassurance…it’s comforting! 🙂

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank you Jackie for your comment
  
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Permalink # marousia said

Perfection

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- Permalink # Sean. "@seanotd" said
  
  Thank you Marousia. It takes passion to recognize passion
  
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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank you Marousia.
  
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Permalink # Just Poetry said

Lovely Shadorma.. : )

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank you for your comment
  
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Permalink # Laura Hegfield said

simple and sweet…right to the heart.

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank you Laura
  
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Permalink # John (@bookdreamer) said

A shadorma seems to best fit this romantic shots

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank you John. I appreciate your comment.
  
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Permalink # Monty Wheeler (bumfuzzled2004) said

sweet and romantic. something lil fat bummy can’t do. but I admire you guys who can 🙂 great job, sean 🙂

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Monty, with the right filly you will rock! lol thank you for the comment!
  
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Permalink # ayala said

Passionate….

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank you Ayala.
  
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Permalink # Roxy said

sigh…so sweet…I love it..

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  Thank you, Roxy. I appreciate that coming from a passion poet.
  
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Permalink # Life: Between the lines said

I love kisses and shadorma is new to me thus this was quite intriguing 🙂
Thanks for the visit and for noticing my mentioning the father Suen, the main topic of the poem actually 🙂

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- Permalink # knightsheart said
  
  You are welcome. It was a pleasure to have you visit.
  
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