May 8, 2011 Love’s Gifts – @onestoppoetry – Mother’s Day
It is time now you said
Are you so sure I asked
I am not yet so mature
Nor am I quite rich here
If we waited for all that
Our kids would never be
No phallic barrier walls
After stopping our magic pills
We make love with abandon
For kids are best love stirred
We laugh at odd beliefs heard
The passionate picks the sex
The first is scary gray
I follow her away
As they close your tummy
Now Lauren she is pink
We make love on a trip
For their wedding day joy
It becomes another funny
As your big tummy grows
The day comes on again
My small birthday present
As they close your tummy
Little Amanda cries hard
We raise both of them right
We raise both of them well
We send them off to learn
We know they taught us first
Our once love has changed
Our partnership is over
Our loves remain in life
Our children always loved
Happy Mother’s Day.
Tags: Knight of the Heart, knightsheart, love, Love's Gifts, onestoppoetry, Poetry, Sean Vessey, seanotd
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Permalink # Tino11 said
Its true, our children teach us so much as we endeavour to teach them. When they fly the nest, a hole appears, but I am thankful that now we have Tinks to fill that void.
Permalink # knightsheart said
So true. Thank you for your comments
Permalink # claudia said
a whole journey you are taking us on..from the first seeds of love until they start to fly…good to see them fly ..
Permalink # knightsheart said
Thank you, Claudia. It is good to see them fly.
Permalink # gautami tripathy said
You covered a lifetime there…..touched to the core…
let it be forever
Permalink # knightsheart said
Thank you, gautami. I hope there is more to come. 🙂
Permalink # moondustwriter said
They will continue to teach us …
They are beautiful and beloved girls (those three)
Permalink # knightsheart said
Thank you, Leslie. They all are beautiful and beloved these girls.
Permalink # ayala said
A lifetime of love..lovely!
Permalink # knightsheart said
Thank you. Yes, it continues this lifetime of love.
Permalink # Sandra Parrotto said
very personal, very intimate, you shared a “real” journey of loving, having babies and seeing them off into the world… I smile…
Permalink # knightsheart said
Thank you very much for your comments, Sam. I appreciate them. This journey is a big part of my life 🙂
Permalink # jenneandrews said
This covers much ground and is very moving– I like the inclusion of detail and avoiding of cliches about love and mothering. xxxj
Permalink # knightsheart said
Thank you Jenne. I appreciate your comments 🙂
Permalink # Reflections said
Life is a great teacher, but none compares to that of motherhood.
Permalink # knightsheart said
That is true. Thank you for your comment.
Permalink # RepressedSoul said
Lovely that you are man enough to tribute the mother of your kids Sean, both beautiful young women. Congratulations
Permalink # knightsheart said
Thank you, Shân. I love all my women.
🙂
Permalink # john said
Life is never the same when you become a parent
Permalink # knightsheart said
That is so true, John,
Permalink # mystic margarita said
Nothing/no one makes us want to become better human beings than our kids. Loved how intensely personal your poem is and how wonderful it is that you paid a tribute to the mother of your two lovely daughters.
Permalink # knightsheart said
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate them 🙂
Permalink # Karla Stewart Okala said
Very moving. So nice that you could still remember the loving moments that led to the conception and birth of your children, even after that relationship has ended.
Permalink # knightsheart said
Karla, thank you for your comments. Special moments are not forgotten.
Permalink # shayrul said
This is so very lovely. Lucky women you have, and have had in your life.
Permalink # knightsheart said
Thank you Cheryl. I enjoyed your comments. 🙂