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July 1, 2011 Loves Way Back – Friday Poetically – @onestoppoetry

Back in time, I would not change my path that leads to your smile
With children I love, fire from above, and you, dearest love
For a life with you, hand in hand, I gladly walk pain’s mile
Back in time, I would not change my path that leads to your smile

From deep darkness defiled I come with heart to our love’s isle
You feel my warmth, my heart’s love for you, my beautiful dove
Back in time, I would not change my path that leads to your smile
With children I love, fire from above, and you, dearest love

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/Not an old work but i wouldn’t change a thing
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Permalink # Wings over waters said

I’d hope you wouldn’t want to change anything. Sounds lovely.. 🙂

Permalink # knightsheart said

Thank you, Louise. It is.

Permalink # tess kincaid said

This is nice. It seems to be begging to be set to music.

Permalink # knightsheart said

thanks, i am thinking Phil Collins

Permalink # Kim Nelson said

Lyric and romantic. Lovely reminiscence.

Permalink # knightsheart said

Thank you. I appeciate your comments.

Permalink # moondustwriter said

“My path that leads to your smile”
hmm you have mastered romance and the Triolet

Permalink # knightsheart said

Thank you, Leslie, for your kind comments. Romance requires a lifetime to truly master.

Permalink # ayala said

I love that you would not change a thing to your path…”that leads to your smile” Isn’t it true that most of the time we would not change anything at all, because it brought us to this moment 🙂

Permalink # knightsheart said

very true. It all brought us to this moment. We would not change it if we could.

Permalink # C Rose said

I wouldn’t change a thing either! This is beautiful my friend. ~ Rose

Permalink # knightsheart said

Thank you, Rose.

Permalink # Luke Prater said

Sweet sentiment here, Sean

Permalink # knightsheart said

Thanks, Luke. I am alleged to be sweet.

Permalink # brian said

smiles. the desire not to change a thing…that is a beautiful thing indeed…warm smiles sean…

Permalink # knightsheart said

Thanks, Brian. Life is grand when you feel that way without the shouldas, couldas, and wouldas. smiles

Permalink # dani said

beautiful, Sean! ♥

Permalink # knightsheart said

Thank you, Dani !!

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July 1, 2011 Loves Way Back – Friday Poetically – @onestoppoetry