May 17, 2011 Crosswalk – octain -#oneshotwednesday – @0nestoppoetry
I dreamed your dream again last night,
It was clear you came from behind,
covering my eyes with hands so fine.
Love me now, we said, it’s so right.
Hold us so close, be a warm host.
We kissed long until morning’s light,
traced our fingers down wiggly spine,
as one we dreamed our dream last night.
Tags: I Dream I Want, Knight of the Heart, knightsheart, love, Octain, onestoppoetry, Poetry, Sean Vessey, seanotd
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Knight of the Heart (knightsheart) 
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moondustwriter
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I appreciate that you take your time to learn the forms we share on One Stop
Even your words have a dreamy undertone – nicely configured Octain
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knightsheart
said
I like the form and playing in the form. Thank you for your kind comments, Leslie.
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mystic margarita
said
Your words create such a beautiful, dreamy ambiance. Loved reading it.
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knightsheart
said
Thank you mm. Love setting a table for a word feast.
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brian
said
nice when you can dream together and dreams come true…
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knightsheart
said
Thanks Brian. Dream a dream of her fire brings out the best of my desire.
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Apryl Gonzales
said
lovely Sean, I could feel a dream like sensation. Nice One Shot!
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knightsheart
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Thank you Apryl. I love making a dream one can feel.
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Pat Hatt
said
Wow nice take on the dream
As you words ring true at the seam
Also quite creative with that form
As you break from the norm
Was a very nice read
Here at your feed
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knightsheart
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Thanks, Pat. I appreciate your verse.
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jackiedick
said
I loved this poem. Who wouldn’t respond to sweet all night love, written in lovely language. So nice, Sean!
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knightsheart
said
Thank you Jackie. I like providing the all nighiters to one who appreciates it.
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C Rose
said
This is a touching piece Sean, easily journeyed into that dream. Lovely write ~ Rose
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knightsheart
said
Thank you Rose. I am glad it is easy to fall into the dream.
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Pen
said
A lovely octain. Beautiful imagery and flow.
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ayala
said
Lovely and sensual !
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knightsheart
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Thank you, Ayala. I am glad it found a place to land with you.
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mindlovemisery
said
Love the concept of sharing dreams. Romantic poem =)
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knightsheart
said
Thank you. I appreciate that you liked it and found it romantic.
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knightsheart
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Thank you Pen. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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dani
said
“as one we dreamed our dream last night”
a wonderful way to dream
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knightsheart
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Thank you, Dani. It is a greatvwayvto dream