May 6, 2011 Waterfalls – @onestoppoetry – Friday Poetically – Shadorma
Waterfalls
Love across my soul
Birds call hearts
None answer
In the quiet depths of life
Alone with myself
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///Chargin Falls By Jason-Morrison At Flickr ///
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Knight of the Heart (knightsheart) 
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Tino11
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I love waterfalls, such power coupled with the sound that can be so mesmerising.
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knightsheart
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Thank you for your comments.
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claudia
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in the quiet depths of life alone with myself..this can be a good and a bad place…sometimes i love to be alone with myself..in the woods..on a walk…time to think..lovely shadorma you wrote sean
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knightsheart
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Thank you Claudia. Time to think is good and bad…
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jacqueline dick
said
A somewhat sad, yet lovely poem calling to love…to answer, waiting…
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knightsheart
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Thank you for your insights, Jackie.
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Matt Coughlan
said
Not being able to share a beautiful moment with someone is heartbreaking. Thanks for sharing!
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knightsheart
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Very True, Matt. Thank you.
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RepressedSoul
said
Really tangible sadness in this Sean, just waiting for someone to join the waters edge 😉
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knightsheart
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Thank you Shan. I appreciate your remarks very much.
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brian
said
nice pull on the emotion….and play on the bird call as well…
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knightsheart
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Thanks, Brian, for your kind comments.
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Anna :o]
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Sad, but beautiful.
Anna :o]
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knightsheart
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Thank you Anna. I appreciate your comments.
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liv2write2day
said
I really like this form and how you were able to pack so much into it.
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knightsheart
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments very much.
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Mama Zen
said
Beautiful.
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knightsheart
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Thank you.
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leah
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I bet if you listen carefully he wasn’t alone.
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knightsheart
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You are wise Leah.:-)
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moondustwriter
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love the majesty and yet the solitude of a waterfall. That’s where I always retreat to think and listen
Nicely done Shadorma
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knightsheart
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Thank you Leslie for your comments.